Lionpaw

[Scarstar~Shadowstar]

Shadowstar leaped up on the Highbranch and called for everyone to meet.
When the clan was gathered she cleared her throat and said "Lionkit can you step up here?"
When he did she meowed "Lionkit you are now 6 moons old, and you are ready to become a warrior app. From this moment on you will be known as Lionpaw. Treeclaw, step up here please."
As Treeclaw leaped up Shadowstar looked at Lionpaw with a gleam in her eyes, she saw something in this little cat that would be great. She was very interested to see what would become of him.
"Treeclaw, you are an amazing fighter and hunter, you will be Lionpaw mentor, pass down what you know.
Before Lionpaw jumped down Shadowstar stoped him and whispered something only he could hear, "I see greatness in you Lionpaw. Dont let me down."

[Rainspark]

Snowblaze's eyes shone with pride. He didn't show it, but he was pleased to finally have something of a son. He always brought food to the golden tom-kit, and even played with him once, a play-fight. Then Appleblossom had passed by and he cut off abruptly. He was still the same cat. He was not nicer or more patient. But it just proved there was a small amount of love in him, reserved for something as innocent as a kit. But it was that innocence he wanted. Everyone saw him as a cold, fierce, dangerous warrrior that was ambitious and wanted to be deputy. That was true, but Lionpaw saw him as something else: the cat that had raised him, cared for him, protected him, and would always be there. He thought Snowblaze deserved to be deputy, too, but a flicker of determination had risen in him as well: he wouldn't mind that job himself. In the future of course. And that was what Snowblaze wanted. He would raise this tom as best as he could, make him a great warrior, the best fighter of the Clan, and hopefully it was worth it. The white tom led the chant, "Lionpaw! Lionpaw!"

Lionpaw's chest swelled with pride, and he raised his head proudly. They were cheering for him! He nodded at Shadowstar, and vowed then, to her, and to himself, he would be the best warrior he could be. He padded forward to meet Treeclaw, a flash of anxiety in his eyes. What did Treeclaw think of him?


(I didn't forget my plan for Snowblaze. he attacks Rougeheart and is later exiled. Lionfury, im not sure if i still want him called that, realizes who the warrior really is, and his true plans are. he is a great warrior by this time. so he changes his plans, if he ever becomes deputy, it would be becuase starclan wanted it, and shadowstar felt he deserved it. he would be fair and just, not just powerhungry like his father. he wanted the clan to be great, not just him... okay, im done now, lol)

[treeclaw]

(ok. lets see what i can do when half asleep)


treeclaw looked down at the young cat. He rememberd when was in his place. being given his mentor.

[Rainspark]

(lol aww, tired?)

Lionpaw shifted on his paws. "Er, hi! Treeclaw... It's soo cool that you're my mentor! I've heard the stories; you're a great warrior! Er, I think we're supposed to touch noses..." he looked a bit embarrassed.

[treeclaw]

"yes we are" treeclaw said. so. they did. treeclaw had to lean down a little awkwardly becuase of his injured fourleg.

[Rainspark]

Lionpaw stepped backwards afterwards, studying Treeclaw's injury. He narrowed his eyes. His first thought was that this was weakness. But then again, if he could still hunt and fight as well as any warrior, he certainly wasn't weak. His final thought was that Treeclaw would be a good mentor. "Can we start training now?"
(do you like th name Lionpride?)